A BOX IN MY ROOM

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A BOX IN MY ROOM

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Inside my room, a large box hides.
When I open it, the contents spill over the side.
It's full of letters and pictures from when our love was still new.
Some saying sweet things, about how our love was so true.
That box collects dust now; for no more letters do I get.
Since our love is sealed, our fate has been set.
Sometimes I wonder, what would be different if you weren't here.
But I also know that would be my greatest fear.
I know you love me, though sometimes I forget.
A reminder from you is always my best bet.
I hope we are together forever, as long as we live.
I will love you with all of my heart, as much as I can give.
I will try to be your everything, your best, and your all.
I promise to always pick you up whenever you fall.
I hope you will do the same for me, as I will for you.
Will you be there for me? WIll you be true?
We have had some hard times, no hiding this.
But we have always made up, and sealed it with a kiss.
I know things won't always be a fairy tale.
The only thing I pray is that you won't fail.
The box inside my room is a symbol.
OF what our love sometimes resembles.
Spilling over, full and true
Yet untouched, sad and blue.
So dust it off, look inside within.
Realize how neglected our love has been.
i <3 B@nAn@s!!!
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That's a really beautiful Poem.
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fluffy wrote:That's a really beautiful Poem.
thats really a double post, now im going to have trouble fixing this :(
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Psychotic_Carp wrote:
fluffy wrote:That's a really beautiful Poem.
thats really a double post, now im going to have trouble fixing this :(
I think that this version is the right one!
Can you delete a topic?
Can you delete the other one?
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fluffy wrote:
Psychotic_Carp wrote:
fluffy wrote:That's a really beautiful Poem.
thats really a double post, now im going to have trouble fixing this :(
I think that this version is the right one!
Can you delete a topic?
Can you delete the other one?
im lost.....thats not good!!!
not sure which one she wants deleted
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Well she wrote this one in the other one:
s3xy_k0rean_babi22 wrote:sry don't pay attention to this one...itz wrong...i didn't realize but i made a mistake n' i had to do it all ova again!...EEEKKKKK!
I can't check them against each other ...so I don't know what to tell you> :?
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all fixed, now my comments gone :(
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Oh dear, on rereading I think they're identical. :?
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fluffy wrote:Oh dear, on rereading I think they're identical. :?
the other one is now gone. that was me dilema
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Psychotic_Carp wrote:
fluffy wrote:Oh dear, on rereading I think they're identical. :?
the other one is now gone. that was me dilema
Well you can always leave your nice compliment in this thread.
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fluffy wrote:
Psychotic_Carp wrote:
fluffy wrote:Oh dear, on rereading I think they're identical. :?
the other one is now gone. that was me dilema
Well you can always leave your nice compliment in this thread.
that would be out of place by now.........this whole set of replies will seem to be weird to everyone else since the other post is gone :P
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Post by s3xy_k0rean_babi22 »

wow...i'm so0o0o sry for confusing everyone but u got the rite one deleted...itz glad to be bakk too! lolz
i <3 B@nAn@s!!!
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well i think i missed all the action... great poem i love it
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